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Detectives Inc.
A Terror of Dying Dreams
(An excerpt from the film
script)
by Don McGregor
Thrilling Detective is really
pleased to present something a little different.
But first, a little background...
Back in 1985, Don McGregor had
a vision for a private eye film, about his racially-mixed team
of tough New York eyes, based on characters he had originally
created for the highly-claimed graphic novel A
Remembrance of Threatening Green. He
had a script and everything, for what was "primarily a presentation
piece," but you know what they say about the best laid plans
of mice and men and McGregors...
Undaunted, Don turned around and
reworked the film script, transforming it into the second graphic
novel, A Terror of
Dying Dreams, featuring private eyes
Ted Denning & Bob Rainier , collectively known as Detectives Inc.
Now, for the first time, Thrilling
Detective is pleased to present a glimpse at not only Don's original
film script,
but also the original comic
script for the same scene (both reproduced
here, warts'n'all), as well as the actual comic book page that
was the ultimate result, as rendered by comics legend Gene Colan.
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Script | Comic Book Script |
Comic Page |
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| 195.CONTINUED. |
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.....................RAINIER
........(Out to convince Denning)
It's a scam! I already said it! Carruthers is going to take those
funds and skip!
....................DENNING
Ohh-kay. And Burnett? Your theory is, Burnett was a part of the
scam?
Rainier shrugs.
....................RAINIER
Maybe. Maybe not. Maybe Burnett just happened to stumble onto
the scam. The guy may have been a psychopath who beat his wife,
that doesn't necessarily mean he would steal from sick kids.
Then again, he wanted to belong to Curruther's crowd pretty bad,
he might have ignored anything. I think Curruthers panicked when
he learned we were nosing around. maybe when Curruthers turned
his back on Burnett out at the benefit, maybe Burnett threatened
to expose him.
Denning stands up, purposefully.
....................DENNING
Let's ride out to see Curruthers. Let's see how he reacts when
we pop the news that we know about his financial condition.Just
throw the whole scam thing at him, see what he does.
Rainier goes to his desk, opens up
his desk draw.
....................RAINIER
Tell you what. You play Groucho. I'll be Chico. We'll let him
be Margaret Dumont.
Rainier pulls out a shoulder holster
and a gun, starts to shrug into it.
....................DENNING
Do you have to take that?
....................RAINIER
I think it's wise. I think you should carry yous. You remember
the bozo with the gun?
....................DENNING
I never forget bozos with guns. I'm still not packing
a piece.
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| 195.CONTINUED. |
195 |
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Dierdre watches the both of them. She senses the tense
reluctance in Denning stems from some incident in his past that
she knows nothing about.
....................RAINIER
...............(Checking gun.)
Okay, Wyatt Earp. Be that way.
....................DIERDRE
You were expecting that kind of trouble?
....................RAINIER
(Snapping gun cylinder closed, holstering it.)
I'm not expecting anything. In thisbusiness, you don't expect,
you just prepare.
Dierdre looks at Denning, wanting
to ask but knowing intuitively that it is a sensitive question.
....................DIERDRE
Is it okay if I ask you a personal question?
....................DENNING
Why I don't want to pack a piece?
....................DIERDRE
Seems...odd for a private ey...investigator.
....................DENNING
.....(Quietly, with some anguish, some rage.)
I had to shoot a teenager once...case concerning the boy whose
father talked to you about us...I didn't have much choice.
..(He
heads to the door, stops, turns to her.)
In the beginning, I felt real guilty about it. I still wish it
hadn't had to happen. I would have loved to have gone through
life without having to kill somebody, and this guy made it so
I couldn't. So, sometimes, instead of feeling bad about it, I
get pissed off t him, because he gave me no choice but to fire
that gun.
...(A
LONG BEAT, he stares at the floor, then up
...................at Dierdre.)
Killing people was not the reason I became an inestigator.
....................DIERDRE
I know.
Rainier, knowing the scene is awkward,
becomes all physical activity, heading for the door with great
purpose.
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Script | Comic Book Script |
Comic Page |
Copyright (c) 1985, 1999 Don McGregor
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Don McGregor is an often innovative
and ground-breaking comic writer, who's given us such unique
comic book gumshoes as Nathaniel Dusk
and Alexander and Penelope Risk
and Detectives, Inc. He confesses
that his love affair with private eyes probably started with
77 Sunset Strip. In his early teens, he was positive if
you looked up the word "suave" in the dictionary you'd
see a picture of Efrem Zimbalist, Jr. His first private eye comic
was actually a fanzine version of Detectives, Inc. way
back in 1969 (the characters of Rainier and Denning were originally
designed for him and Alex "Blackjack" Simmons to play
on film). Early on, Don had commandeered his dad's 8mm Bolex
camera, and discovered that if you wrote the movie, and directed
the movie and starred in it, you always won the fights. Through
his long and varied career in comics, he's written for Creepy
Magazine, and scripted such tiles as Panther's Rage,
the first comic by a mainstream publisher to have a virtually
all-black cast; Killraven, with Craig Russell; the Sabre
graphic novel, and the acclaimed Ragamuffins with Gene
Colan, the first comic printed in color from an artist's pencils
(no ink!). This style was later used to great effect in the second
Detectives, Inc. series, and in both Nathaniel Dusk series. Don's
currently writing the Zorro newspaper strip, and riding
through the wind-swept night, though he swears he'll never abandon
his beloved eyes. The original 1980 Detectives, Inc. graphic
novel, A Remembrance of Threatening Green, and its 1987
sequel, A Terror for Dying Dreams, have recently been
reprinted.
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